Chaos - 4.11.03
This comics sucks. It looks much better up close. Make sure when
making a drawing that you look at if from afar occasionally.
And no more trying to rip scripts from reality too closely. Now
real life ideas go in a bin till they are totally, not partially
you can see. I still can't draw explosions. Argh. Comic has no
rythm. Joke isn't strong enough. Atleast it will be funny to the
people involved. Noticed I capitalized the D on damn. Why the
hell did I do that? One benefit is that Adrien (as he is in real
life), will be an excellent agent of chaos. Stay tune for his
those who do not know. Adrien Laws, is not Adrian Perez. Maximum
comics will hopefully not suck as much. Also, make sure you always
buy toilet paper. Because if you are occassionally lazy, then
you may decide that you should finish your comic before going
to the supermarket to buy toilet paper.
close it looks a little better. Got to make the characters
fill more space next time.
have four names from other people for the comic. I will think
of a few more and then arrange a vote.